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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

These chart and graph show how much money spent on junk food every week and consumption of junk food in gram. It is clear from the graph that high income people are more spending on junk food and Fish and Chips, the most favour among low income people, is the higher consumption in gram. According to what is shown, we have the low income people spent, in general, 40 pound on junk food, 18 on Fish and Chips, 15 on Hamburger and 7 on Pizza. While average income people spent 70, 33 on hamburger, 25 on Fish and Chips and 12 on Pizza. Then we have high income people spent 80 on fast food, 45 for Hamburger, 19 for Pizza and 16 for Fish and Chips. And all these numbers are per week. While consumption of junk food in gram. First we have Hamburger was 40 gram in 1970, 50 in 1975 and in 80s is 90 then 120. And in 90s by 300. Second, there is Fish and Chips by 90 in 1970 and 100 in 1975. So we have 150 in 1980 and 300 for next five years. And 500 in 1990. Third, Pizza is 300 in 1970 and a little drop by 280 in 1975. Then 220 in 1980 and 200 in 1985. And last by 210 in 1990. To sum up we could say that the most consumption, Fish and Chips, is the most favour for low income people and high income people is the most spend on fast food. And this is normal because there are more low income people than high income in any society.
These chart and graph
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on
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junk
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food
every week and
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of
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junk
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in gram. It is
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clear
from the graph that
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high
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income
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people
are more spending on
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junk
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food
and Fish and Chips, the most
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among
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low
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income
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people
, is the higher
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consumption
in gram.

According to what
is shown
, we have the
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low
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income
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people
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,
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, 40
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on
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junk
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, 18 on Fish and Chips, 15 on Hamburger and 7 on Pizza. While average
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income
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people
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70, 33 on hamburger, 25 on Fish and Chips and 12 on Pizza. Then we have
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80 on
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, 45 for Hamburger, 19 for Pizza and 16 for Fish and Chips. And all these numbers are per week.

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in gram.
First
we have Hamburger was 40 gram in 1970, 50 in 1975 and in 80s is 90 then 120. And in 90s by 300. Second, there is Fish and Chips by 90 in 1970 and 100 in 1975.
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we have 150 in 1980 and 300 for
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drop by 280 in 1975. Then 220 in 1980 and 200 in 1985. And last by 210 in 1990.

To sum up we could say that the most
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, Fish and Chips, is the most
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favour
for
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low
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people
and
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high
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is
the most spend on
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fast
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. And this is normal
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there are more
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than
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high
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in any society.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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271 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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