Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows the amount and types of waste collected at a recycling center in one UK town between 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the amount and types of waste collected at a recycling center in one UK town between 2011 and 2015. jD7dN
The bar chart illustrates the amount of waste in different categories which were recycled in a town in the UK from 2011 to 2015. It is clear that the amount of tins waste collected to be recycled experienced a constant drop, as opposed to an increase in that of paper, glass and gardening waste over a 5-year period. It is apparent from the chart that paper/card was the most recycled type of waste over the period given. In 2011, about 65 tonnes of paper/card waste was recycled, which then dropped markedly to just over 50 tonnes in 2013 before making a recovery and soar to exactly 70 tonnes in 2015, a 5-tonne growth after 5 years. A similar upward trend was also observed in the amounts of glass and gardening waste, with the figures rising constantly from 28 tonnes to 45 tonnes for the former and from 25 tonnes to 35 tonnes for the latter. Tins were most recycled in 2012, at about 48 tonnes, which was 3 tonnes more than that in 2011 and 2013. The figure then fell continuously to only 32 tonnes in 2015, making tins the least recycled waste material at the end of the surveyed period.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
categories which were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
in a town in the UK from 2011 to 2015.

It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the amount of tins
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
collected to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
experienced a constant drop, as opposed to an increase in that of paper, glass and gardening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
over a 5-year period. It is apparent from the chart that paper/card was the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
over the period
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
.

In 2011, about 65 tonnes of paper/card
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
, which then dropped
markedly
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
over 50 tonnes in 2013
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
making a recovery and soar to exactly 70 tonnes in 2015, a 5-tonne growth after 5 years. A similar upward trend was
also
observed in the amounts of glass and gardening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
, with the figures rising
constantly
from 28 tonnes to 45 tonnes for the former and from 25 tonnes to 35 tonnes for the latter.

Tins were most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
in 2012, at about 48 tonnes, which was 3 tonnes more than that in 2011 and 2013. The figure then fell
continuously
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
32 tonnes in 2015, making tins the least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
material at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the surveyed period.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount and types of waste collected at a recycling center in one UK town between 2011 and 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    Mobile phone producers for consecutive two years
    The table shows the market share of world wide mobile phone for producers for two consecutive years 2005, and 2006. Overall, it is evident that Nokia mobile phone accounted for highest in market share with 32. 5% and L. G was the least with 6. 7% To begin Nokia had 32. 5% market share in 2005 whic...
  • 5band
    Grammar check for mobile phone
    The table shows the market share of world wide mobile phone for producers for two consecutive years 2005, and 2006. Overall, it is evident that Nokia mobile phone accounted for highest in market share with 32. 5% and L. G was the least with 6. 7% To begin Nokia had 32. 5% market share in 2005 whic...
  • 6band
    Earnings of Three Bakeries in London
    The graphs highlights the amount of proceeds which bakeries in London over 10-year period from 2000 to 2010. In general what stands out from the graph is that whileLovely loaves earnings witnessed a decline throught the period, the amount of Robbie’s bakery exprerienced opposite trend. Additionally...
  • 5band
    Ruler of glad today is the best
    The table shows the market share of world wide mobile phone for producers for two consecutive years 2005, and 2006. Overall, it is evident that Nokia mobile phone accounted for highest in market share with 32. 5% and L. G was the least with 6. 7% To begin Nokia had 32. 5% market share in 2005 whic...
  • 5.5band
    The map shows the changes of American town in 1948 and 2010.
    The given pictures illustrate the alterations which are noticed in an American town from the year of 1948 to 2010. At a fleeting glance, it is observed that on the north side of the town there was a petrol station. Following this, sone factories were built in east side. To add on, there are two bog ...
  • 5.5band
    IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Bar Chart:
    It has been a debatable topic in recent times, whether family or pears is dominating one's development, especially adults. Because of this, some people think that it will develop anti-social behaviour in Children. However, both family, as well as friends, play an important role in a child's life to...





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart below shows the amount and types of waste collected at a recycling center in one UK town between 2011 and 2015.