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The table shows the market share of world wide mobile phone for producers for two consecutive years 2005, and 2006. Overall, it is evident that Nokia mobile phone accounted for highest in market share with 32. 5% and L. G was the least with 6. 7% To begin Nokia had 32. 5% market share in 2005 which was overall highest in all phone types in market and slightly more (35%) in 2006 Motorola was about approximately 9% higher than Samsung which was 11. 8% The trend for Sony Ericsson was a bit different as it was higher in 2006 with 7. 4%, while L. G amounted to 6. 3%. In 2005 sonny Ericsson was the least mobile phone for producers, amounting to 6. 3% and was 1. 1% lower than L. G phone.
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share with 32. 5% and L. G was the least with 6. 7%

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IELTS academic Ruler of glad today is the best

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4 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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