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Richest country should help to poorer countries.

Richest country should help to poorer countries. VloQ3
In the current age of time there are many poorer nations in the world. which can not basic facilities to our people's such as water food electricity and health services. These countries people demand our rights to elected government of thiese countries On the other hand it can be seen that the richest country's in the map of the world. They provide all facilities to our nation's including health education and peace related needs. More over the economy of richest countries is well stable and grow day by day as compared to poor countries. further more we can say that richest countries operate to poor countries for different aspects such as provide loan and other facilities of these country's. In my opinion richest countries should help to poorer countries because these country's could not survive without having support to richest countries. At this time poorer countries fighting for poverty and other basic needs. i thinks richest countries should collaborate to poorer country's for prevent of poverty and solve other problems
In the
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age of time there are
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many
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poorer
nations in the world.
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which
can not basic facilities to our
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people
's such as water food electricity and health services. These
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countries
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people
demand our rights to elected
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government
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thiese
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countries
On the
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other
hand it can be
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seen
that the
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richest
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country's
in the map of the world. They provide all facilities to our nation's including health education and peace related needs. More over the economy of
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richest
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countries
is well stable and grow day by day as compared to poor
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countries
.
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further
more we can say that
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richest
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countries
operate to poor
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countries
for
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different
aspects such as provide loan and
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other
facilities of these
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country's
. In my opinion
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richest
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countries
should
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help
to
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poorer
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countries
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because
these
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country's
could not survive without having support to
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richest
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countries
. At this time
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poorer
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countries
fighting for poverty and
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other
basic needs.
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i
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thinks
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richest
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countries
should collaborate to
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poorer
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country's
for
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prevent
of poverty and solve
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other
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IELTS academic Richest country should help to poorer countries.

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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