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Some useful of smartphone we know

Some useful of smartphone we know ewOeA
First, we can use smartphone to take photos and videos. With just a small phone, you can save your wonderful memories and essentials with just a few steps of taking pictures. . In ađition, . we can easily find the information we need through a smartphone. Once connected to WIFI or mobile data network, we can go online and search for study lessons and anything we want know. Besides, we can buy goods quickly and conveniently and pay easily on your phone with some simple operations without having to go to the place.
First
, we can
use
smartphone to take photos and videos. With
just
a
small
phone, you can save your wonderful memories and essentials with
just
a few steps of taking pictures.
.
In
ađition
, .
we
can
easily
find the information we need through a smartphone. Once connected to
WIFI
or mobile data network, we can go online and search for study lessons and anything we want know.
Besides
, we can
buy
goods
quickly
and
conveniently
and pay
easily
on your phone with
some
simple operations without having to go to the place.
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IELTS academic Some useful of smartphone we know

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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