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The table provides information about the number of mobile phones bought by users over 6 years. Overall the most popular brands by the end of the period in 2012 were Nokia and Samsung, whereas Ericsson and Motorola were the least popular. Apple mobile phones stayed in the middle compared to other marks. The number of Nokia company sold phones was 345 and 2006, then it fluctuated until 2011. In 2012 I the data of sold phones became 335. It can be seen that people used to buy Motorola phones in 2006 often, but during the period the number of sold phone decreased quickly. In contrast, Ericsson company never was popular over the 6 years and by 2012 the amount of sold phones was the same as Motorolla. Apple company started to sell their products only since 2007 and the number of sold phones was the lowest. But the number rose gradually and in 2012 it was 135. 8 million sold products. In conclusion, Nokia and Samsung companies showed a steady increase in phone sales. Erickson and Motorola illustrated the opposite trend. Apple company started as the lowest number of sold phones but by the end of this span, data became more than Ericsson and Motorolla.

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bought
 by users over 6 years.

Overall
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end
 of the period in 2012 were Nokia and Samsung, whereas Ericsson and Motorola were the least popular. Apple mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 stayed in the middle compared to other marks.

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2012 I
 the data of sold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 became 335.

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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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buy
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phones
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often
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 of sold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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. In contrast
, Ericsson You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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phones
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Motorolla
.

Apple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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started
 to sell their products This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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number
 of sold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 was the lowest. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 and in 2012 it was 135. 8 million sold products.

In conclusion
, Nokia and Samsung You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
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showed
 a steady increase in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 sales. Erickson and Motorola illustrated the opposite trend. Apple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
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started
 as the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of sold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
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but
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end
 of this span, data became more than Ericsson and Possible spelling mistake found.Motorola
Motorolla
. 