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The given map chart demonstrate the information about the infrastructure of the university Sports in present and future time

The given map chart demonstrate the information about the infrastructure of the university Sports in present and future time 6NEbj

Having a cursory glance is enough to notice that a plethora of improvement will be done by planners of University Sports Centre, but only Reception area and change room are not remove in following years. It is clearly seen that there are some outdoor courts which will be replaced into leisure pool in the east side of Sports Centre, although a changing room and sports shop will be opened under the leisure pool, however a changing room, gym, seating place Reception area and a pool about 25 meter are remained in the middle of Sports Centre. Moving further, some outdoor courts are demolished and converted into sport hall behind the seating area, as well as two dance Studio will be developed on the left hand side of this centre in this upcoming years. At last a cafe will be constructed in the south side.

Having a cursory glance is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to notice that a plethora of improvement will be done
 by planners of University You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 Reception area and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 room are not remove in following years. It is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 outdoor courts which will be replaced
 into leisure pool in the east side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
, although a changing room and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop will be opened
 under the leisure pool, however
 a changing room, gym, seating place Reception area and a pool about 25 Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: "meters".meters
meter
are remained
 in the middle of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
. Moving further
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 outdoor courts are demolished
 and converted into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 hall behind the seating area, as well
 as two dance Possible agreement error. The noun 'Studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: "studios".Studios
Studio
 will be developed
 on the Did you mean the adjective "left-hand"?left-hand
left hand
 side of this Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in this upcoming years. At last a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 will be constructed
 in the south side. 