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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. M0K6

The line graph shows the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities between 2001 and 2010. All in all, we can able to see that Australian universities are more popular than the overseas student's starting with the entry of 20, 000 students and it's inclined to 40, 000 over a four year period between 2005 to 2010 the registration doubled and leads to a range of 80, 000 above at the end of 2010. By contrast, the local student population is always less in range comparative to overseas. In 2001, they were 15, 000 students studying at universities the enrolment reaches 20, 000 in the mid of 2006-2007. The enrolment jump to 40, 000 at the end of 2008 and the range same till date. So it's clear the Australian students are not interested to enroll themselves in their country's own institution. the fact is clear bot the type of students is not interested to enroll themselves in their country's own university.

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shows
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enrolments
 of overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 and local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
 between 2001 and 2010.

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can able to
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see
 that Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
 are more popular than the overseas student's starting with the entry of 20, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
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between 2005 to 2010
 the registration doubled and leads to a range of 80, 000 above at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2010.

By contrast, the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 population is always less in range comparative to overseas. In 2001, they were 15, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 studying at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
 the Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 reaches 20, 000 in the mid of 2006-2007. The Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 jump to 40, 000 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2008 and the range same till date.

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clear
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students
 are not interested to enroll themselves in their country's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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 fact is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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university
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