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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. jKM1
The bar chart illustrates information about the average house rates of New york, Tokyo, London, Madrid and Frankfurt from 1990-1995 to 1996-2002 compared with the house rates in 1989Overall, according to the chart in the first stage New york, Tokyo and London experienced a downward trends while Madrid and Frankfurt had an upward trends. In contrast, in the second stage New york, Madrid, Frankfurt, London had a growth except TokyoTo begin, in 1990-1995 New york had a drop of house prices approximately 5%. Similarly, Tokyo and London had a huge fall of house prices nearly 8% respectively. In contrast, in the next period of time New york and Madrid had achieved a rise of 5% and 4%. While, surprisingly London had the highest portion almost 12%From 1990-1995 the house rates of Madrid and Frankfurt was about 1% and 2%. On the other hand, Tokyo had the lowest prices of5% in 1996-2002
The bar chart illustrates information about the average
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rates of
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New york
, Tokyo, London, Madrid and Frankfurt from 1990-1995 to 1996-2002 compared with the
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rates in 1989Overall, according to the chart in the
first
stage
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New york
, Tokyo and London experienced a downward trends while Madrid and Frankfurt had an upward trends.
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, in the second stage
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New york
, Madrid, Frankfurt, London had a growth except
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TokyoTo
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, in 1990-1995
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New york
had a drop of
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prices approximately 5%.
Similarly
, Tokyo and London had a huge fall of
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prices
nearly
8%
respectively
.
In contrast
, in the
next
period of time
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New york
and Madrid had achieved a rise of 5% and 4%. While,
surprisingly
London had the highest portion almost 12%From 1990-1995 the
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rates of Madrid and Frankfurt was about 1% and 2%.
On the other hand
, Tokyo had the lowest prices of5% in 1996-2002
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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