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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. MMo19
The chart below provide the information about change in average house price in different type of citied between the year of 1990 to 2002. And it is compared with the average house price in the year of 1989. Overall, we can see that in 1990 to 1995 Tokyo and London were highly decreased and Frankfrut was increased. In 1996 to 2002 London was extremely high and Tokyo was most down. In diagram we can see that, we have two average year group. Firstly, In the year of 1990 to 1995 New York was decreased approximately 5%. Madrid was in upward direction up to 1. 5%. Hence, Tokyo was got lowest direction approx 2. 5%. Frankfrut was increased up to 2%. London was decreased like Tokyo up to 2. 5%. This all percentage change from the 1989 year's prices. Lastly, In the year of 1996 to 2002, Newyork was get high percentage rate up to 5%. Madrid had vary approx 4%. In Tokyo it was goes always down side and percentage was 5%. Frankfrut was goes upward direction to 1%. And in the last London was increased up to highest 12%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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