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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Astralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this engery use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Astralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this engery use. ljWkK
The pie-chart illustrates the information about using energy in Australia household and second chart shown greenhouse gas used by Australian household overall, it can be seen that household energy additional using in heating and lowest rate in cooling. while, the greenhouse gas are provided data highest user in water heating. It is 32% and the lowest is similer as a household energy. The energy consumption of other appliances is second highest and it is less than a fifth percentage. In Australian the household energy and greenhouse gas the same consumption of is cooling. In refrigeration people are using 7%. The greenhouse gas consumption mainly water heating. It is around lees than a third and second highest is other appliances. It might be half of percentage in household energy. Moreover, lighting is 8% using the Austrian household greenhouse gas emissions
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Astralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this engery use.

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