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Many universities now offer academic courses over the Internet. However, some people still prefer learning in traditional classrooms. Which do you think is better?

Many universities now offer academic courses over the Internet. However, some people still prefer learning in traditional classrooms. Which do you think is better? m7rq
when I am away from home I usually miss two things. the thing I miss the most is my mother because she is the one who cares about me and understands me she also cooks for me my favorite meals and she always prays for me and just hearing her prayers provide me with deep down comfort even if I was facing difficulties through my day. Another thing I will be missing is my family, having lunch together around the table, sharing ower problems, and trying to help and support each other is just priceless. that reason these are the things I will be missing the most if I'm away from home.
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I am away from home I
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miss two things.
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thing I miss the most is my mother
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she is the one who cares about me and understands me she
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cooks for me my favorite
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she always prays for me and
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hearing her prayers provide me with deep down comfort even if I was facing difficulties through my day. Another thing I will be missing is my family, having lunch together around the table, sharing
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priceless.
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reason these are the things I will be missing the most if I'm away from home.
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IELTS academic Many universities now offer academic courses over the Internet. However, some people still prefer learning in traditional classrooms. Which do you think is better?

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