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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013. 67DK
The bar chart illustrates the information of people who ate fast food regularly in the USA from 2003 to 2013. The data are measured in percentage. Overall, in the year 2006, people who ate once a week food of hotels was showed an upward trend, while in the year 2006 and 2013 experienced a downward trend over the period respectively. To begin with, a tiny fraction of people were consuming fast food in the year 2003. Also, in the year 2006 and 2013 have a similar rate by 3% and 2% respectively. However, in terms of once a week, people who consumed food was higher in the year 2006 approximately less than a third. Then, people of 2003 was higher than 2013 people to merely 32% and more thana quarter. Moreover, person's who never ate fast food of resturants was lowest rate as shown in figure. Likewise, in the year 2003, individuals were comprised less than a 5% of human, whereas human kind of 2006 and 2013 was at a same level as shown in figure.
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2006 and 2013 have a similar rate by 3% and 2%
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2006 approximately less than a third. Then,
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013.

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