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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Yp6n

The process diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks are made. Overall, it is a majorly 5 step and simple process, which starts with cleaning water and end with exporting bottles to the supermarket. The first stage is the cleaning of water, in this water transfers to the filer. After that water is softened and chemicals were added. Through the pump water will reach to next stage which is called "heating evaporation and carbonation". In this water passes through the electric heaters for heating water and then cooling pipe will cool down the temperature of the water. now carbon dioxide will be added to water. In stage 3, flavour, syrup, and colour will be added and mixed in the mixing tank. Filtering and filling of drinks in the battles and cans will be done in stage 4. In the final stage, these bottles and cans will be packed in boxes and then exported to the supermarkets.

The process diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks are made
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starts
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water
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 with exporting bottles to the supermarket.

The first
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stage
 is the cleaning of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 transfers to the filer. After that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is softened
 and chemicals were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Through the pump You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 will reach to next
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stage
 which is called
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. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passes through the electric heaters for heating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and then cooling pipe will cool down the temperature of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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now
 carbon dioxide will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to water.

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flavour
, syrup, and Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
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added
 and mixed in the mixing tank. Filtering and filling of drinks in the battles and cans will be done
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 4. In the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, these bottles and cans will be packed
 in boxes and then exported to the supermarkets. 