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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female teachers teaching six subjects at a Canadian University in 2012.

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female teachers teaching six subjects at a Canadian University in 2012. LyJV
The bar graph depicts the information about the count of male and female teachers who taught six different subjects at a Canadian University. The year under consideration is 2012. Overall, it is apparent that out of the 6 subjects, there was only one subject, where male teachers were more than female teachers and in one, the number of both was same. It can be clearly seen from the graph that the number of females teaching Economics, Natural Sciences and Psychology was the highest that was 250. It was followed by Engineering and Programming with an equal figure that was 200. Lastly, the number of female teachers teaching Linguistics was almost 130. Moving towards males, Natural Sciences were maximum that was 250. Male teaching Psychology and Linguistics placed in the second and third position respectively. Next, the male teaching subjects; Engineering, Programming, and Economics fell in descending order.
The bar graph depicts the information about the count of male and
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who taught six
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at a Canadian University. The year under consideration is 2012.

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, it is apparent that out of the 6
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subjects
, there was
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, where male
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were more than
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and in one, the number of both was same.

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clearly
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seen
from the graph that the number of
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females
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Economics, Natural Sciences and Psychology was the highest that was 250. It
was followed
by Engineering and Programming with an equal figure that was 200.
Lastly
, the number of
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female
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teachers
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teaching
Linguistics was almost 130.

Moving towards
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males
, Natural Sciences were maximum that was 250. Male
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Psychology and Linguistics placed in the second and third position
respectively
.
Next
, the male
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teaching
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subjects
; Engineering, Programming, and Economics fell in descending order.
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IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female teachers teaching six subjects at a Canadian University in 2012.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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