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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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The bar chart illustrates the figures of people in the USA eating frequently in fast food restaurants during the period from 2003 to 2013. In general, it is obvious that the lowest percentages groups belonged to people who always or never ate fast food, meanwhile the highest groups were people having moderate frequency who ate these meals. According to the bar chart, it can be delivered into three groups following the frequency of eating at fast restaurants amongst USA people. The first group which consisted of people eating every day and never choosing these fast food restaurants accounted for small fractions at less than 5 percentages. By contrast, the proportion of the group including people who sometimes used fast food (once a week and once or twice a month) was roughly 30 percentages on average. This percentage was almost two times higher than the one of the remaining group who often or rarely ate at fast food restaurants. On the other hand, the change during the years from 2003 to 2013 had a difference amongst people groups. In these years, there was a stable level for people who ate every day, a few times a year or never chose fast food. Meanwhile, 2006 witnessed a rise of people eating several times a week and once a week with 20% and 33% correspondingly. In addition, in 2013, there was an increase of people going to fast food restaurants for eating once or twice a month.
The bar chart illustrates the figures of
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people
in the USA
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eating
frequently
in
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fast
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food
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restaurants
during the period from 2003 to 2013.

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, it is obvious that the lowest
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percentages
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groups
belonged to
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people
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who
always or never
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ate
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fast
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food
, meanwhile the highest
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groups
were
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people
having moderate frequency
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who
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ate
these meals.

According to the bar chart, it can
be delivered
into three
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groups
following the frequency of
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eating
at
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fast
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restaurants
amongst USA
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people
. The
first
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group
which consisted of
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people
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eating
every day and never choosing these
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fast
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food
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restaurants
accounted for
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small
fractions at less than 5
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percentages
. By contrast, the proportion of the
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group
including
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people
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who
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sometimes
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used
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fast
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food
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(once
a week and
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once
or twice a month) was roughly 30
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percentages
on average. This
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percentage
was almost two times higher than the one of the remaining
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group
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who
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often
or rarely
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ate
at
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fast
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food
restaurants.

On the other hand
, the
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change
during the years from 2003 to 2013 had a difference amongst
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people
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groups
. In these years, there was a stable level for
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people
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who
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ate
every day, a few times a year or never chose
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fast
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food
. Meanwhile, 2006 witnessed a rise of
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people
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eating
several times a week and
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once
a week with 20% and 33%
correspondingly
.
In addition
, in 2013, there was an increase of
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people
going to
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fast
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food
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restaurants
for
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eating
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once
or twice a month.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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