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The pie chart and line graph show the water spending in Australia in 2004.

The pie chart and line graph show the water spending in Australia in 2004. BAna

The pie chart and line graph show the water spending in Australia in 2004. Overall, the pie chart illustrates which professional spheres and they expend water in Australia and how water spending by the citizens in ordinary houses. The majority of professional working expenditure is contributing from business following by industry, almost the government has a low part of contribute to spending water. Middle level people have a high level of promotion for the left-side chart. In addition, people’s most expend categories are garden next to bathroom respectively. The absolute leader of water consumption is the residential(houses)category, which had occupied more than a half-part of all pie chart. Residential(apartaments), business, industry demonstrate a take up the same territory of the graph. Furthermore, 2 sections also are seen like a having the similar area of the chart: government and other. The bar chart which based on ordinary human’s water usage in Australia in 2004 is can seen the most high frequency usage of water for Bathroom(28%) and Kitchen(26%) respectively. However, necessities to Kitchen(10%) and Toilet(15%) spent little and normal frequency of water resources in the highest extent year. Washing clothes(20%) had an one-fifth of frequency range of all water assets in 2004.

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