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Pie charts of ways finding out the news

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The two given pie charts compare the percentages of people using ways of getting news in two nations, namely Germany and Nigeria. It is clear that Nigerians use TV as a principal way to update news, which is nearly two thirds (62%), in Germany the figure is just below a third (30%). Besides, German newspaper’s reader is more than three times higher than people who read news in print in Nigeria (13%). Having an insignificantly different proportion, in Germany, radio and internet are 10% and 11% respectively. However, in Nigeria, radio overwhelms internet to become the second favorite way of accessing news, with 22%, brings it down on par with friends and family’s sources as a least commonly uses ways. Likewise, other sources are rated eventual use in Germany at 4%. The figures show an upward pattern is observed in the using tv of Nigerians mean that the percentage of other methods such as internet and other resources are lower than it in Germany.
The two
given
pie charts compare the percentages of
people
using
ways
of getting
news
in two nations,
namely
Germany and Nigeria.

It is
clear
that Nigerians
use
TV as a principal
way
to update
news
, which is
nearly
two thirds (62%), in Germany the figure is
just
below a third (30%).
Besides
, German newspaper’s reader is more than three times higher than
people
who read
news
in print in Nigeria (13%). Having an
insignificantly
different
proportion, in Germany, radio and internet are 10% and 11%
respectively
.
However
, in Nigeria, radio overwhelms internet to become the second favorite
way
of accessing
news
, with 22%, brings it down on par with friends and family’s sources as
a
least
commonly
uses
ways
.
Likewise
, other sources
are rated
eventual
use
in Germany at 4%.

The figures
show
an upward pattern
is observed
in the using
tv
of Nigerians mean that the percentage of other methods such as internet and other resources are lower than it in Germany.
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