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The chart below shows how frequently people eat junk food

The chart below shows how frequently people eat junk food JoAO6

Fast food is popular since 20th century. The way in which it has captured market is appreciable. In this chat, frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in USA is given. Bar graph illustrates different percentage of population from 2003, 2006 and 2013. People which prefer eating at fast food restaurant everyday are less than 5% at all the times. It had more popularity in 2006, where people ate 20% several times in a week and near about 30% US citizen once. Surprisingly, trends declined in 2013, it is a fact that percentage got a boon about 30% but for a once or twice in a month. This could be due to the market share to nutritious food and balanced diet. Junk food for the few times a year accounts closely to 15%. In conclusion, the number of Americans consume several times in a week. Decline in gathering at junk eatable restaurants in 2013 depicts that everyone got to know the importance of nutritious diet.

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