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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The provided charts depict the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic utilization in six distinct regions around the world. In general, it is clear that in four regions – Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, and South America, an extensive quantity of water was utilized for agriculture. Meanwhile, North America and Europe used the biggest amount of water for industrial objective. To begin with, more than 80% of the water utilization in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia went to agricultural area. Likewise, 71% of the water in South America was consumed for the same area. Moreover, industrial water utilization accounted for 12% and 5% in South East Asia and Central Asia respectively. Interestingly, these two regions consumed the same proportion of water for domestic utilization (7%). In addition, people in South America consumed more water for household than for industrial utilization, 19 and 10% accordingly. Finally, household purpose consumed 9% of the water in Africa and the rest is consumed for industrial sector. In contrast, in North America and Europe, about half of water consumption was for industrial sector. Furthermore, North Americans utilized 39% of the water for agriculture while less amount of water (32%) was used by Europeans. Lastly, as can be seen, both regions consumed the smallest proportion of the water for household sector.
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in six distinct
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Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, and South America, an extensive quantity of
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was utilized
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the biggest amount of
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objective.

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with, more than 80% of the
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in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia went to agricultural area.
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, 71% of the
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in South America was
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for the same area.
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,
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industrial
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accounted for 12% and 5% in South East Asia and Central Asia
respectively
.
Interestingly
, these two
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the same proportion of
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for domestic
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(7%).
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in South America
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more
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for household than for
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, 19 and 10%
accordingly
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Finally
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9% of the
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in Africa and the rest is
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for
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industrial
sector.

In contrast
, in North America and Europe, about half of
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consumption was for
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sector.
Furthermore
, North Americans utilized 39% of the
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for agriculture while less amount of
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(32%) was
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used
by Europeans.
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, as can be
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, both
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the smallest proportion of the
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for household sector.

IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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