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The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart illustrates how many exchange students in Australia in the years 2019 and 2020. Looking at the graph, we can see that the amount of students who mainly came from various nations of Asia experienced fluctuated trends. During that time, China accounted for the highest level of total students studied abroad. In 2019, at the top position was students came from China, at about 182, 326 students before decreasing slightly to 167, 569 students in next year. India and Nepal were ranked the sencond and third place, with the both figures at 108, 049 and 50, 262 students respectively. The quantity of international students in 3 different countries, namely Vietnam, Brazil and Malaysia witnessed a slight decline in 2020, except Vietnam saw a minimal rise, about 23, 269 students. However, the figures of those could not overcame 25, 000 students in 2 years. Brazil and Malaysia went down about 21, 086 students and the latter falling at 19, 564 students.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.

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