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The diagram below depicts various stages in generation, conversion, usage and transmission of solar power.

The diagram below depicts various stages in generation, conversion, usage and transmission of solar power. J0Rle
The picture gives an information about how to solar power generate in different steps such as conversion and transmission. Overall, it can be seen that the solar power generation process is linear and man-made in nature. It starts with sun-light and ends at supply to the national grid. The process has six stages and the key stages are light from sun, solar panels, electricity meter and national grid. First of all, the sun rise and give nature light and it transmit light in solar panels, which is fixed on the building. Secondly, the solar panels catch the light from sun and it go to inverter. In the inverter not only direct current available but also alternative current present. Then, the current passes into the electric meter. In the next stage of process, the electricity meter divide power into two parts via switch board. Firstly, the household receive power from electric meter for use. On the opposite side, electricity meter also supply power to the national grid.
The picture gives an information about how to
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generate in
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different
steps such as conversion and transmission.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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solar
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power
generation process is linear and
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man
-made in nature. It
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starts
with sun-light and ends at supply to the national grid. The process has six stages and the key stages are
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light
from sun,
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solar
panels, electricity
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meter
and national grid.

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First of all
, the sun rise and give nature
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light
and it
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transmit
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light
in
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solar
panels, which is
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fixed
on the building.
Secondly
, the
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solar
panels catch the
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light
from sun and it go to inverter. In the inverter not
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only
direct
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current
available
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but
also
alternative
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current
present. Then, the
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current
passes into the electric meter.

In the
next
stage of process, the electricity
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meter
divide
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power
into two parts via switch board.
Firstly
, the household receive
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power
from electric
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meter
for
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use
. On the opposite side, electricity
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meter
also
supply
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power
to the national grid.

IELTS academic The diagram below depicts various stages in generation, conversion, usage and transmission of solar power.

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166 words
6.0
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