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The full time education and the part time education

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The chart illustrates the full time education and the part time education of the male and the female in the three different periods. Overall, the number of male studying part time education is more than the women in 1970/71 but female are more than male in 1990/91. The full time education in 1970/71 for the male are higher than the female. On the other, female are more than male in 1990/91. The number of male part time educators (1000) is more than female part time educatorsin 1970/71. In 1990/91, the female part time educators is more than male. The male full time educators (less than 100) are more than the female in 1970/71. On the otherhand, in 1980/81 the female full time educators are in greater than the male and in 1990/91 the number of male and female are almost equal(greater than 200).
The chart illustrates the
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education and the
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education

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in the three
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education is more than the

women in 1970/71
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female
are more than male in 1990/91. The
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education
in 1970/71 for the male are higher than the
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. On the other,

female are more than male in 1990/91.

The number of male
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(1000) is more than
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part time


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is more than male.

The male
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(less than 100) are more than the female

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the male and in 1990/91 the number of male and
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are almost equal(greater than 200).

IELTS academic The full time education and the part time education

Academic
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9 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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