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The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006

The charts give information United Kingdom and United State energy expense since 2000 until 2006. The data is showed by number. Overall, it can be seen that the most significant increase was gas and the biggest fall was coal. Regarding to the first chart of energy consumption at UK in 2000 and 2006. The first greatest increase was gas which climbed slightly 15. Followed by oil which was risen almost 2 and other renewable sources rose above 10 to appropriately 10. Different from coal which fell sharply 25 and nuclear power declined approximately 5. However, in USA the oil was begun from gas which climbed significantly 10. Meanwhile, nuclear power jumped slowly above 10 and pil which had 5. On the other hand, coal was plunged to 10 and other renewable sources dropped under 10.

The charts give information United Kingdom and United State energy expense since 2000 until 2006. The data is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 by number. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the most significant increase was gas and the biggest fall was coal.

The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".RegardingRegard to
Regarding to
 the first
 chart of energy consumption at UK in 2000 and 2006. The first
 greatest increase was gas which climbed slightly
 15. Followed by oil which was risen
 almost 2 and other renewable sources rose above 10 to appropriately
 10. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
Different
 from coal which fell sharply
 25 and nuclear power declined approximately 5.

However
, A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".in the USA
in USA
 the oil was begun
 from gas which climbed significantly
 10. Meanwhile, nuclear power jumped slowly
 above 10 and Possible spelling mistake found.PILoilPhilpinpitpie
pil
 which had 5. On the other hand
, coal was plunged
 to 10 and other renewable sources dropped under 10. 

5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

135 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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