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The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006
The charts give information United Kingdom and United State energy expense since 2000 until 2006. The data is showed by number. Overall, it can be seen that the most significant increase was gas and the biggest fall was coal. Regarding to the first chart of energy consumption at UK in 2000 and 2006. The first greatest increase was gas which climbed slightly 15. Followed by oil which was risen almost 2 and other renewable sources rose above 10 to appropriately 10. Different from coal which fell sharply 25 and nuclear power declined approximately 5. However, in USA the oil was begun from gas which climbed significantly 10. Meanwhile, nuclear power jumped slowly above 10 and pil which had 5. On the other hand, coal was plunged to 10 and other renewable sources dropped under 10.
The charts give information United Kingdom and United State energy expense since 2000 until 2006. The data is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
by number.
Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the most significant increase was gas and the biggest fall was coal.

The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".
Regarding to
the
first
chart of energy consumption at UK in 2000 and 2006. The
first
greatest increase was gas which climbed
slightly
15. Followed by oil which
was risen
almost 2 and other renewable sources rose above 10 to
appropriately
10.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Different
from coal which fell
sharply
25 and nuclear power declined approximately 5.

However
,
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".
in USA
the oil
was begun
from gas which climbed
significantly
10. Meanwhile, nuclear power jumped
slowly
above 10 and
Possible spelling mistake found.
pil
which had 5.
On the other hand
, coal
was plunged
to 10 and other renewable sources dropped under 10.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below show the UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006

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135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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