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The chart below show the the information about the extramet oil production capacity e in gulf countries between in 1990 to 2010.

The chart below show the the information about the extramet oil production capacity e in gulf countries between in 1990 to 2010. 2ar7x
The provided bar chart illustrates the information about the estimate oil manufacture capacity from 6 various gulf Nations from 1990 to 2010. The data has been calibrated in millions. Overall, it is manifest that, the highest production of oil in Saudi Arab, which was inclined with the passage of time, while minimum production in Qatar. Moreover, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and UAE observed the upward trend through the given period. To commence with, Saudi Arab tops in the list in the manufacture of the oil, it accounted for over 8 million of v barrels per day in 1990, and the production increased and reached at over a 14 million per day in 2010. Nevertheless, about 2 millions extemed oil production in Iran in beginning year. The production of oil growth slowly to more than 4 million everyday. Likewise, 2 million oil production manufacture in starting year, and it comprised 24 million each day after two decades. Moving further, UAE remained stable in 1990 to 2000, and there was a slight rise the production of oil, it estimated that nearby 4 millions per day in 2010. Finally, approximately 1 million per day production of oil in 1990 and it was no changed the manufacture of the oil in the last year.
The provided bar chart illustrates the information about the estimate
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capacity from 6 various gulf Nations from 1990 to 2010. The data has
been calibrated
in millions.

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, it is manifest that, the highest
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production
of
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oil
in Saudi Arab, which
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with the passage of time, while minimum
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production
in Qatar.
Moreover
, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and UAE observed the upward trend through the
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of the
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oil
, it accounted for over 8
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million
of v barrels per day in 1990, and the
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production
increased and reached at over a 14
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million
per day in 2010.
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, about 2
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millions
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in Iran in beginning year. The
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in starting year, and it comprised 24
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each day after two decades.

Moving
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, UAE remained stable in 1990 to 2000, and there was a slight rise the
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, it estimated that nearby 4
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Finally
, approximately 1
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in 1990 and it was no
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IELTS academic The chart below show the the information about the extramet oil production capacity e in gulf countries between in 1990 to 2010.

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