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describe the process how sugar is produced from sugarcane.

describe the process how sugar is produced from sugarcane. kg5QR

The given diagram demonstrates how sugar is manufactured from the sugarcane plant step by step. Overall, sugarcane to sugar making process completes in eight stages starting from growing of the plant to the drying of the final product. At first, sugarcane is left until it grows to a mature plant so that it can be harvested. Harvesting of the plant can be done in two methods. Either it can be harvested manually by hands or by using the machine. After, It is transferred in a crusher to take out the juice from sugarcane. Juice taken from the process poured into a filter which is called as limestone filter. Next, Purified juice is put into a container for heating. After heating, the water content in juice evaporates to make the material more viscous. The syrup is taken into the rotating machine so that it separates sugar from the syrup. At the end, The crystals is left for cooling process. Then it is ready for our daily need.

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given
 diagram demonstrates how sugar is manufactured
 from the sugarcane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plant
 step by step.

Overall
, sugarcane to sugar making process completes in eight stages starting from growing of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plant
 to the drying of the final product.

At first
, sugarcane is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 until it grows to a mature You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plant
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so
 that it can be harvested
. Harvesting of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plant
 can be done
 in two methods. Either it can be harvested
manually
 by hands or by using the machine. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, It is transferred
 in a crusher to take out the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 from sugarcane. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
Juice
 taken from the process poured into a filter which is called
 as limestone filter. Next
, Purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is put
 into a container for heating. After heating, the water content in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 evaporates to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the material more viscous. The syrup is taken
 into the rotating machine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it separates sugar from the syrup. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, The crystals is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for cooling process. Then it is ready for our daily need. 