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The Pie Charts illustrate information regarding percentages of students who got admission in Northwest University by faculty and number of Arts students by regions. Overall, it can be seen that majority of the Arts students belong to South America and Arts is the most favourite subject whereas, medicine is least famous. To begin with, about 23% of peoples want to study arts which is by far largest proportion closely followed by Computing and Science for which 22% and 21% graduate opted for. The percentage of inductee wishing to learn business is 14%. Furthermore Engineering lovers are 9%, while law and medicine are least popular subjects with only 6 and 5% learners are going for this courses. Out of 112 arts students who are non US major part is constituted by South Americans about 79. The number of Europeans are 21, whereas, Asians are six in number. Apart from this, there are four Australian and two African pupils which is least among all.

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