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The given pie charts display the information about three different ways of using water in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Informed in percentage. By comparing in purposes which are use for industrial, farm, and inland in 6 areas. In Africa, Central Asia and, South East Asia water are used for planting around 85 per cent differ from domestic, It is used 12 times less compare to plating - around 8 per cent. Meanwhile South America is the fourth in the rank of using water for agriculture. It is noticeable that Europe and North America use water to farm-produced just 39 and 32 per cent as follow. Almost half of the usage are for mass production.

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 pie charts display the information about three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
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 ways of using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Informed in percentage.

By comparing in purposes which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for industrial, farm, and inland in 6 areas. In Africa, Central Asia and, South East Asia You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for planting around 85 per cent differ from domestic, It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 12 times less compare to plating Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 around 8 per cent. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
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 South America is the fourth in the rank of using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for agriculture.

It is noticeable that Europe and North America This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to farm-produced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 39 and 32 per cent Did you mean "as follows"?as follows
as follow
. Almost half of the usage are for mass production. 