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Calculate heating and durable goods

Calculate heating and durable goods 8L85l

The graph illustrates the importance for electric power in the UK during the normal days in cold and hot days, while the pie chart delineat how electric energy is utilise in an average Britainia's house. Overall, it can be observed that in winter, electricity is used in greater units as compare to summer. Whilst English people spent maximal percentage of electricity in heating room, heating water. In terms of Summer, the public expend nearly 19, 000 to 16, 000 in 9 hours afterward it increased to 20, 000 units in 15 hours and reached its top-most ratio, and then drop slightly to 18, 000 in 24 hours. However, In winter, the typical demand of electricity is significant initially 39, 000 in 3 hours and after some oscillation which dropped around 32000 in 24 hours. Moreover, the usage of electricity in Eurpean homes is 42. 5% in the heating room and water, and merely 17. 5% Oven, kettles, and washing machines whereas lighting TV, radio and other tools are just 15% used in their home

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cold
 and hot days, while the pie chart Possible spelling mistake found.delineatedeli neat
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 how electric energy is Consider using a past participle here: "utilised".utilised
utilise
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Britainia
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

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, it can be observed
 that in winter, electricity is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in greater units as compare to summer. Whilst English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spent maximal percentage of electricity

in heating room, heating water.

In terms of Summer, the public expend nearly
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hours
 afterward it increased to 20, 000 units in 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
hours
 and reached its top-most ratio, and then drop slightly
 to 18, 000 in 24 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
hours
. However
, In winter, the typical demand of electricity is significant initially
 39, 000 in 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
hours
 and after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 oscillation which dropped around 32000 in 24 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
hours
. Moreover
, the usage of electricity in Possible spelling mistake found.European
Eurpean
 homes is 42. 5% in the heating room and water, and merely
 17. 5% Oven, kettles, and washing machines whereas lighting TV, radio and other tools are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 15% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in their home