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The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart demonstrates the process of deforestation and disadvantages that comes with it. Generally speaking, the cutting of forest creates more than one issue and each individual step ripples to create a pressing problem that is debilitating to nature. In details, the problem arises when massive cutting of trees is done in the forest. The heavy equipments utilized harden the soil which water cannot flow through and result to flooding. Furthermore, the process could potentially cause fire, soil erosion from lesser roots and dry air. Soil erosion and drought caused from lesser roots and decrease in moisture, that were supposed to be provided by plants and trees, destroys vegetation. The fire causes mass destruction on the micro-organism's food source which lessens their population and the migration of other species in the forest. These destroys the diversity of species and cuts back on vegetation. The biodiversity is compromised in this matter.
The flow chart demonstrates the process of deforestation and disadvantages that
comes
with it.
Generally
speaking, the cutting of forest creates more than one issue and each individual step ripples to create a pressing problem
that is
debilitating to nature.

In
details
, the problem arises when massive cutting of trees
is done
in the forest. The heavy equipments utilized harden the soil which water cannot flow through and result to flooding.
Furthermore
, the process could
potentially
cause fire, soil erosion from lesser roots and dry air. Soil erosion and drought caused from lesser roots and decrease in moisture, that
were supposed
to
be provided
by plants and trees,
destroys
vegetation. The fire causes mass destruction on the micro-organism's food source which lessens their population and the migration of other species in the forest. These
destroys
the diversity of species and
cuts
back on vegetation. The biodiversity
is compromised
in this matter.
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IELTS academic The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.

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2 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
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