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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE MEDICAL RESEARCH FUNDING AMOUNT IN MILLIONS OF DOLLARS IN SOMELAND AND ALSO SHOW THE DEATH NUMBER OF AREA.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE MEDICAL RESEARCH FUNDING AMOUNT IN MILLIONS OF DOLLARS IN SOMELAND AND ALSO SHOW THE DEATH NUMBER OF AREA. yx7ol
THE BAR CHARTS ILLUSTRATES THE RESULT OF MEDICAL RESEARCH DONTAION AMOUNT IN SOMELAND AND SECOND BAR CHART REPRESENT THE RATE OF DEATH IS SAME PLACE. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN DOLLARS. OVERALL, THE HIGHEST MONEY DONATED FOR THE DISEASE NAMED AS AIDS WHEREAS, THE PEAK NUMBER DEATH IS CAUSED BY TB. THE LEAST HAZARDOUS ILLNESS IS LEPROSY. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE PEOPLE OF SOMELAND DONATES THE MOST ON AIDS AT AROUND $1, 75, 000 MEANWHILE, THE FUNDING FOR LEPROSY AND TROPICAL DISEASES IS ALMOST SIMILAR AT $75, 000. THE DONATION FOR DIARRHOEA IS MERELY ABOVE $50, 000 AND THE FUNDS ARRANGED FOR MALARIA IS EXACTLY $50, 000. FINALLY, THE DONATION FOR TB IS THE LEAST WITH ONLY $25, 000. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATES THAT, IN 1990, THE DIGITS CITIZENS DIED BECAUSE OF AIDS AND LEPROSY IS NEAR BY 3. 5 AND 2. 0 RESPECTIVELY. THE DEATH RATE OF TROPICAL DISEASE AND MALARIA IS ACCOUNTED FOR LESS THAN 0. 5 MILLIONS. HOWEVER, THE PEOPLE DIES DUE TO DIARRHOEA IS ONE HALF MILLION. LASTLY, TB IS THE MOST DAGEROUS DISEASES FOR CIVILIANS WITH THE PEAK NUMBER OF DEATHS AT AROUND 1. 75 MILLION.
THE BAR CHARTS
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ILLUSTRATES
THE RESULT OF MEDICAL RESEARCH
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DONTAION
AMOUNT IN
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SOMELAND
AND SECOND BAR CHART REPRESENT THE RATE OF DEATH IS SAME PLACE. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN DOLLARS.

OVERALL
, THE HIGHEST MONEY DONATED FOR THE
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DISEASE
NAMED AS AIDS WHEREAS, THE PEAK NUMBER DEATH
IS CAUSED
BY TB. THE LEAST HAZARDOUS ILLNESS IS LEPROSY.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE
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PEOPLE
OF
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SOMELAND
DONATES THE MOST ON AIDS AT AROUND $1, 75, 000 MEANWHILE, THE FUNDING FOR LEPROSY AND TROPICAL
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DISEASES
IS ALMOST SIMILAR AT $75, 000. THE DONATION FOR
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DIARRHOEA
IS
MERELY
ABOVE $50, 000 AND THE FUNDS ARRANGED FOR MALARIA IS EXACTLY $50, 000.
FINALLY
, THE DONATION FOR TB IS THE LEAST WITH
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ONLY
$25, 000.

THE BAR CHART
FURTHER
COLLATES THAT, IN 1990, THE DIGITS CITIZENS
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DIED
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BECAUSE
OF AIDS AND LEPROSY IS
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NEAR BY
3. 5 AND 2. 0
RESPECTIVELY
. THE DEATH RATE OF TROPICAL
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DISEASE
AND MALARIA
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR LESS THAN 0. 5 MILLIONS.
HOWEVER
, THE
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PEOPLE
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DIES
DUE TO
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DIARRHOEA
IS ONE HALF MILLION.
LASTLY
, TB IS THE MOST
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DAGEROUS
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DISEASES
FOR CIVILIANS WITH THE PEAK NUMBER OF DEATHS AT AROUND 1. 75 MILLION.
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