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The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five different categories by the French and British in 2010. Overall, the British spent more than the French on cars, books and cameras. Both countries spent the most on cars. While the French spent the least on cameras, for the British, the least consumed of these five items was perfume. Both countries spent nearly the same amount on computers. The British spent more on cars, books and cameras than the French. The British spent 450, 000 pounds on cars, and it was 50, 000 pounds more than what the French spent on cars. 400, 000 pounds were spent on books by the residents of the UK, compared with the 300, 000 pounds spent by the French. The most noticeable difference between British and French spending was on cameras. While the British spent 350, 000 pounds on cameras, the French spent only 150, 000 on this item. By contrast, the residents of France spent / expended more money on computers and perfume than the British. As for computers, the French spent around 50, 000 pounds more than the British. Likewise, the spending on perfume by the French also was more than over 50, 000 pounds than the British, with 200, 000 pounds and just under 150, 000 pounds respectively.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money
spent
on five
different
categories by the French and British in 2010.
Overall
, the British
spent
more than the French on
cars
, books and
cameras
. Both countries
spent
the most on
cars
. While the French
spent
the least on
cameras
, for the British, the least consumed of these five items was perfume. Both countries
spent
nearly
the same amount on computers.

The British
spent
more on
cars
, books and
cameras
than the French. The British
spent
450, 000 pounds on
cars
, and it was 50, 000 pounds more than what the French
spent
on
cars
. 400, 000 pounds were
spent
on books by the residents of the UK, compared with the 300, 000 pounds
spent
by the French. The most noticeable difference between British and French spending was on
cameras
. While the British
spent
350, 000 pounds on
cameras
, the French
spent
only
150, 000 on this item.

By contrast, the residents of France
spent
/ expended more money on computers and perfume than the British. As for computers, the French
spent
around 50, 000 pounds more than the British.
Likewise
, the spending on perfume by the French
also
was more than over 50, 000 pounds than the British, with 200, 000 pounds and
just
under 150, 000 pounds
respectively
.
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