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The map show improvement in the university campus from year 2010 and now

The two maps compare the development in different sector of universoty campus between the year from 2010 till today’s date. Overall, there is no such change in the path ways or road, but we can see extension and improvement in different buildings. In 2010, the student accomodation area is too small but now it’s not only extended to two buildings but we have another student accomodation area just oppsite to the first one which is replacement of restaurants and shops in 2010. The other building of student accomodation in 2010 which was opposite to arts and scienc block is now replaced with student facilities that’s include shops, offices, restaurants etc. The main office of university campus is replaced by science block and the teaching block is developed to Arts building completely. While the lakein the middle remains same as the central landmark but unfortunately there is no park area around the lake.
The two maps compare the development in
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sector of
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universoty
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today
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, there is no such
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change
in the
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path ways
or road,
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we can
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see
extension and improvement in
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different
buildings.

In 2010, the
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student
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accomodation
area is too
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small
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but
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now
it’s not
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only
extended to two buildings
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we have another
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student
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accomodation
area
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just
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oppsite
to the
first
one which is replacement of restaurants and shops in 2010. The other building of
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student
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accomodation
in 2010 which was opposite to arts and
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scienc
block is
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now
replaced with
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facilities that’s include shops, offices, restaurants etc. The main office of university campus
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by science block and the teaching block
is developed
to Arts building completely. While the
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lakein
the middle remains same as the central landmark
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unfortunately there is no park area around the lake.
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IELTS academic The map show improvement in the university campus from year 2010 and now

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6.0
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