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The diagram below show the manufacturing process of fish pies

The diagram illustrates the production line of fish pies manufacturing process. Overall this production process has four main ingrediants, potatoes, salmons, sauce and peas. In the beginning, the process start with potatoes, we clean it with pure water and peel it. Later, we cut it into small pieces and put it into boiling water. When it boiled we keep it to get cold. Once the chilling process done, we kept it in storage. On the other hand, we have fresh selmons. For initial stage, selmon fish marinated with salt and lemon juice and put it in oven for few minutes. After this we remove the skin and bones of the fish and inspect it for quality purpose. For final process, we all put selmon fish, potatoes, sauce and peas into microwaveable container and store it in freezer in order to main certain temperature. Now fish pie is ready to dispatch as per the demand of the consumer.
The diagram illustrates the production line of fish pies manufacturing process.

Overall
this production
process
has four main
ingrediants
, potatoes, salmons, sauce and peas.

In the beginning, the
process
start
with potatoes, we clean it with pure water and peel it. Later, we
cut
it into
small
pieces and put it into boiling water.
When
it boiled we
keep
it to
get
cold
. Once the chilling
process
done, we
kept
it in storage.
On the other hand
, we have fresh
selmons
. For initial stage,
selmon
fish marinated with salt and lemon juice and put it in oven for few minutes. After this we remove the skin and bones of the fish and inspect it for quality purpose.

For final
process
, we all put
selmon
fish, potatoes, sauce and peas into microwaveable container and store it in freezer in order to main certain temperature.
Now
fish pie is ready to dispatch as per the demand of the consumer.
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