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The diagram below show the manufacturing process of fish pies

The diagram illustrates the production line of fish pies manufacturing process. Overall this production process has four main ingrediants, potatoes, salmons, sauce and peas. In the beginning, the process start with potatoes, we clean it with pure water and peel it. Later, we cut it into small pieces and put it into boiling water. When it boiled we keep it to get cold. Once the chilling process done, we kept it in storage. On the other hand, we have fresh selmons. For initial stage, selmon fish marinated with salt and lemon juice and put it in oven for few minutes. After this we remove the skin and bones of the fish and inspect it for quality purpose. For final process, we all put selmon fish, potatoes, sauce and peas into microwaveable container and store it in freezer in order to main certain temperature. Now fish pie is ready to dispatch as per the demand of the consumer.

The diagram illustrates the production line of fish pies manufacturing process.

Overall
 this production You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 has four main Possible spelling mistake found.ingredients
ingrediants
, potatoes, salmons, sauce and peas.

In the beginning, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with potatoes, we clean it with pure water and peel it. Later, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 it into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces and put it into boiling water. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 it boiled we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
. Once the chilling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 done, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 it in storage. On the other hand
, we have fresh Possible spelling mistake found.sermonssalmons
selmons
. For initial stage, Possible spelling mistake found.salmonsermon
selmon
 fish marinated with salt and lemon juice and put it in oven for few minutes. After this we remove the skin and bones of the fish and inspect it for quality purpose.

For final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, we all put Possible spelling mistake found.salmonsermon
selmon
 fish, potatoes, sauce and peas into microwaveable container and store it in freezer in order to main certain temperature. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 fish pie is ready to dispatch as per the demand of the consumer. 