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The chart show the moment of the people from rural to urban area in three countries and predicitons for future years

The chart illustrate about the people who travel from rural to urban area in three different countries namely; Iran, Indonesia and Russia from the years 2000 to 2025. Overall, if we can see from 2000 to 2025, we can clearly identify that the millions of people moving from rural to urban area in Iran and Russia gradually increases with the passage of time, but in Indonesia this quantity increasing very slowly. Specifically, in Iran and Russia, the percentage of people migrates from rural to urban area increase gradually and met at 80 millions in 2020, after that from the year 2020 to 2025, we observe that Iran reaches to 95 millions and Russia reaches to 85 millions of the people who migrate from rural to urban area. For Indonasia, this quantity starts from 10 millions in the year 2000 and reaches to 30 millions in the year 2025, which is 65 millions and 55 millions lesser than Iran and Russia respectively.
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in three
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; Iran, Indonesia and Russia from the years 2000 to 2025.

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people
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area
in Iran and Russia
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in Indonesia this quantity increasing
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urban
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increase
gradually
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millions
in 2020, after that from the
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2020 to 2025, we observe that Iran reaches to 95
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and Russia reaches to 85
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people
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2000 and reaches to 30
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2025, which is 65
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