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The chart below show the average seasonal temperatures and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and Summertown. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the average seasonal temperatures and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and Summertown. rajlL
The given bar charts indicates the average seasonal temperature and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and Summertown during the all seasons. The average temperature of Summertown measured high throughout the seasons. And it was at peak of around 35°C during the Summer. For Springfield the temperature touched bottow of 5°C during Winter season. After that it increased, but still it didn't surpassed 20°C, which was the highest temperature measured during Summer. The average rainfall of Springfield was high except in Summer season, where the rainfall in Summertown had a drastic raise of 140mm. In the Winter season the average rainfall measured in Summertown was about 17mm, the lowest of all the average rainfalls. The highest rainfall came in the season of Autumn for Springfield, which was 63mm. At last, the given charts depicts that for Summertown both the average temperature and the average rainfall were high as compared to all other seasons.
The
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bar charts indicates the
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seasonal
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temperature
and
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rainfall
for the cities of Springfield and
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Summertown
during the all seasons.

The
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average
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temperature
of
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Summertown
measured high throughout the
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seasons
. And it was at peak of around
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35°C
during the Summer. For Springfield the
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temperature
touched
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bottow
of
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5°C
during Winter
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season
. After that it increased,
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still
it didn't
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surpassed
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20°C
, which was the highest
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temperature
measured during Summer.

The
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average
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rainfall
of Springfield was high except in Summer
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season
, where the
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rainfall
in
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Summertown
had a drastic raise of
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140mm
. In the Winter
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season
the
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rainfall
measured in
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Summertown
was about
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17mm
, the lowest of all the
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average
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rainfalls
. The highest
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rainfall
came in the
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season
of Autumn for Springfield, which was
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63mm
.

At last, the
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given
charts depicts that for
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Summertown
both the
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average
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temperature
and the
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average
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rainfall
were high as compared to all other
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seasons
.
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IELTS academic The chart below show the average seasonal temperatures and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and Summertown.

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