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Comparison of two maps in present and future

Comparison of two maps in present and future Vy7LQ

The two maps illustrates the present shopping mall and expansion plan of the same mall in Southside near future. Both maps also depicts the nearby area outside the mall at present compare to development plan. Overall the plan is to expand the mall and it's car parking for more stores and parking facilities at the expense of eateries, play area, cinemas and outside land on the east side. At present, Southside mall has Cafe, Play area, Noodle shop, Cinemas on the north side while Supermarket, Entrance and toilet on the south side with department store connected to toilet on the east side. Outside the mall for parking cars there is space present just on the left side of fitness center. On the east side land outside mall is occupied by golf course and Park. According to proposed map Department store expands on the east side on the cost of golf course and park with its own separate entry. On the other hand few fashion stores will be added next to right side of urinal at the present place of Department store while cyber cafe, beauty saloon is placed at the price of cafe and play area. In addition to that two shoe store, gift shop and Cosmetics store will replace Noodle shop and Cinemas.

The two maps illustrates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 and expansion plan of the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 in Southside near future. Both maps also
 depicts the nearby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeignfartherout
outside
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 compare to development plan.

Overall
 the plan is to expand the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 and it's car parking for more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 and parking facilities at the expense of eateries, play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, cinemas and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeignfartherout
outside
 land on the east side.

At You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
, Southside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 has 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
, Play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, Noodle shop, Cinemas on the north side while Supermarket, Entrance and toilet on the south side with department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 connected to toilet on the east side. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeignfartherout
Outside
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 for parking cars there is space You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of fitness center. On the east side land You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeignfartherout
outside
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
is occupied
 by golf course and Park.

According to proposed map Department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 expands on the east side on the cost of golf course and park with its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 separate entry. On the other hand
 few fashion You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
next
 to right side of urinal at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 place of Department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 while cyber 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, beauty saloon is placed
 at the price of 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. In addition
 to that two shoe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
, gift shop and Cosmetics You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 will replace Noodle shop and Cinemas. 