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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The pie graph compares the mean percentages of meal consumed from three nutrients sources sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in the USA. Overall, the percentages of sodium and saturated fat is mostly consumed in dinner, while the rate of added sugar is mainly taken in snacks period in the USA. Moreover, the US people tries to get much nutrients (sodium and saturated fat) from their lunch. The first chart shows that the mean number of sodium is mostly taken in dinner, which is 43%. In addition, the average percentages of sodium contained their food in lunch (29%), breakfast (14%) and snack (14%) respectively. On the other hand, the second graph describes that the saturated fat consumed mainly in dinner (37%) while the least nutrients is taken in breakfast (16%). The third pie chart illustrates the main sources of added sugar is taken in snacks (42%), however, the least is consumed in breakfast (16%). To sum, the US people take least saturated fat, sodium and added sugar in the time of breakfast, while they normally receipt sodium, and saturated fat nutrients in dinner except added sugar.
The pie graph compares the mean percentages of meal
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consumed
from three
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nutrients
sources sodium,
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saturated
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fat
and
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added
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sugar
in the USA.

Overall
, the percentages of sodium and
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saturated
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fat
is
mostly
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consumed
in
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dinner
, while the rate of
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added
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sugar
is
mainly
taken in snacks period in the USA.
Moreover
, the US
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people
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tries
to
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get
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much
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nutrients
(sodium and
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saturated
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fat)
from their lunch.

The
first
chart
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shows
that the mean number of sodium is
mostly
taken in
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dinner
, which is 43%.
In addition
, the average percentages of sodium contained their food in lunch (29%),
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breakfast
(14%) and snack (14%)
respectively
.
On the other hand
, the second graph
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describes
that the
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saturated
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fat
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consumed
mainly
in
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dinner
(37%) while the least
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nutrients
is taken
in
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breakfast
(16%). The third pie chart illustrates the main sources of
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added
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sugar
is taken
in snacks (42%),
however
, the least is
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consumed
in
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breakfast
(16%).

To sum, the US
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people
take
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least
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saturated
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fat
, sodium and
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added
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sugar
in the time of
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breakfast
, while they
normally
receipt sodium, and
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saturated
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fat
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nutrients
in
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dinner
except
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added
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sugar
.

IELTS academic The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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