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According to the data Africa regions have lower literacy

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According to the data, Africa regions have lower literacy rates than the other region. Africa's regions are the continent with the greatest difference in literacy rates between men and women. The table shows 38. 5% the African women being literate and 61. 7% of the African men being able to read and write. On one hand, the chart gives information about how a number of people per doctor in each country. Doctors in Nepal have 100 times as many patients as doctors in Latvia. Latvia had the best healthcare with 200 patients per doctor. Meanwhile, Nepal has 20. 000 patients per doctor. On Other Hand, the pie chart shows in 1990 most of the world’s population lived in rural areas with 58%. But by 2025, this is expected to be much lower. In 2025 most of the world’s populations lived in rural areas with 37%. It’s more than 20% decrease, may be caused by mass immigration of people to cities.
According to the data, Africa regions have lower literacy rates than the other region. Africa's regions are the continent with the greatest difference in literacy rates between
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and women. The table
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38. 5% the African women being literate and 61. 7% of the African
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men
being able to read and write. On one hand, the chart gives information about how a number of
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people
per
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in each country.
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Doctors
in Nepal have 100 times as
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patients as
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doctors
in Latvia. Latvia had the best healthcare with 200 patients per
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doctor
. Meanwhile, Nepal has 20. 000 patients per
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. On Other Hand, the pie chart
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shows
in 1990 most of the world’s population
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lived
in rural areas with 58%.
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by 2025, this is
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expected
to be much lower. In 2025 most of the world’s populations
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lived
in rural areas with 37%. It’s more than 20% decrease, may
be caused
by mass immigration of
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people
to cities.
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IELTS academic According to the data Africa regions have lower literacy

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