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The line graph provides information about food consumption in Australia from 1950 to 2010. Overall, the graph gives 5 different food, which are vegetables, fruit, meat, bread and seafood. All food but the meat was showed an upward trend throughout the given period. In 1950, vegetables had the highest rate of consumption with 140 kg per person. While the seafood was the lowest ratio of consumption with 20 kg and both foods were showed a different trend like a number of consumptions in 1950. The vegetables experienced a fluctuating trend during the period and it reached 160 kg per person. The seafood showed a stable trend until the end of the period. The fruits had about 110 kg per person consumption in 1950, it showed a surging trend until 1970, then the fruit consumption increased dramatically and it approached 140 kg consumption per capita in 2010. The bread experienced an upward trend like fruit and it reached 60 kg consumption per person in 2010. The meat was declined slightly until 1980 and it rose sharply to 120 kg consumption per capita in 1990. However, meat experienced a downward trend in last two decade and it decreased to 80 kg per capita consumption in the end of the given period.
The line graph provides information about
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food
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consumption
in Australia from 1950 to 2010.

Overall
, the graph gives 5
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different
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food
, which are vegetables,
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fruit
,
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meat
, bread and seafood. All
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food
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but
the
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meat
was
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showed
an upward
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trend
throughout the
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given
period.

In 1950, vegetables had the highest rate of
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consumption
with 140 kg per
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person
. While the seafood was the lowest ratio of
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consumption
with 20 kg and both
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foods
were
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showed
a
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different
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trend
like a number of
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consumptions
in 1950. The vegetables experienced a fluctuating
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trend
during the period and it reached 160 kg per
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person
. The seafood
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showed
a stable
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trend
until the
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end
of the period.

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The
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fruits
had about 110 kg per
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person
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consumption
in 1950, it
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showed
a surging
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trend
until 1970, then the
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fruit
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consumption
increased
dramatically
and it approached 140 kg
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consumption
per capita in 2010.
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The
bread experienced an upward
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trend
like
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fruit
and it reached 60 kg
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consumption
per
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person
in 2010.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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meat
was declined
slightly
until 1980 and it rose
sharply
to 120 kg
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consumption
per capita in 1990.
However
,
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meat
experienced a downward
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trend
in last two decade and it decreased to 80 kg per capita
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consumption
in the
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end
of the
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given
period.
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IELTS academic abdulmelik arslan ielts bar chart practice

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
209 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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