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The chart below indicates the different kinds of accomodation that British people chose for their holiday in 2010.

The chart below indicates the different kinds of accomodation that British people chose for their holiday in 2010. Yk6Gd
The given bar chart presents information about the holiday accommodation chosen by people in the United Kingdom in 2010. Overall, the England, Scottish, Northern, and Welsh made similar decisions with hotels being the most popular form of dwelling. It is clear from the data that around half of the people in each of the four countries selected to stay in hotels. This percentage was highest in England, at roughly 55 percent, which was almost twice as high as the number of people who cooked for themselves (27%) and higher than the number of people (12%) who stayed in campsites and finally, the number of people who lived in caravans was lowest (6%). The Scots and the Welsh followed a similar pattern, with around half of visitors took the hotels and just about 30% in self-catering apartments. The one exception was caravan holidays at 12%, which was more popular than camping holidays in Scotland. Northern Ireland, on the other hand, follows a different trend. Caravans, which were far more popular than self-catering and camping, were chosen by about 30% of the population.
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in the United Kingdom in 2010.

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, the England, Scottish, Northern, and Welsh made similar decisions with hotels being the most popular form of dwelling.

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from the data that around half of the
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in each of the four countries selected to stay in hotels. This percentage was highest in England, at roughly 55 percent, which was almost twice as high as the number of
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people
who cooked for themselves (27%) and higher than the number of
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(12%) who stayed in campsites and
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, the number of
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who
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in caravans was lowest (6%). The Scots and the Welsh followed a similar pattern, with around half of visitors took the hotels and
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about 30% in self-catering apartments. The one exception was caravan holidays at 12%, which was more popular than camping holidays in Scotland.

Northern Ireland,
on the other hand
, follows a
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trend. Caravans, which were far more popular than self-catering and camping,
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by about 30% of the population.
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IELTS academic The chart below indicates the different kinds of accomodation that British people chose for their holiday in 2010.

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