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Write a report describing the information in the graph below fertility rate(births per woman)Gulf countries .

Write a report describing the information in the graph below fertility rate(births per woman)Gulf countries. 0aLe3
The given bar graph compares the fertility rate of women across six countries over 10 years, between 1990 and 2000. Overall, it is clear from the given bar graph that the total figure for six states encountered a slight fluctuation while starting with merely 3 in 1990 and ending with a similar trend in 2000 respectively. To begin with, the number fertility rates in Oman underwent drastically went up to 7 in 1990 but went gone down to 5, 5 in 2000. Most strikingly, in Kuwait, it dropped from 3 in 1990 to 2 in 2000 and the expected remaining almost equal to births amount in Bahrain for the whole mentioned year's. Similarly, there was a skyrocketing growth in the quantity of fertility indicated in Qatar steep go up from 4 in 1990, on the contrary reach peaked a lower number in 3 by 2000. To explain this, there was a drastically surge by Oman and Saudi Arabia and underwent a marked fall to around 5 at the end of the period. Likewise, In the UAE, it dramatic rose to 4 in 1990 and steadily came down to 4 in 2000, providing the lowest amount of birth indexing. Moreover, the number of birth indexing in Oman has a rocked improved to 7 in 1990 and supplied with the highest amount of fertility among six different countries. Also, the next second-largest amount by Saudi Arabia which begins with around 6, 5 in 1990 and finished with merely 5, 5 in 2000.
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bar graph compares the
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fertility
rate of women across six countries over 10 years, between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it is
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clear
from the
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given
bar graph that the total figure for six states encountered a slight fluctuation while starting with
merely
3 in 1990 and ending with a similar trend in 2000
respectively
. To
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begin
with, the number
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fertility
rates in Oman underwent
drastically
went up to 7 in 1990
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but
went gone down to 5, 5 in 2000. Most
strikingly
, in Kuwait, it dropped from 3 in 1990 to 2 in 2000 and the
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expected
remaining almost equal to
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births
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amount
in Bahrain for the whole mentioned year's.
Similarly
, there was a skyrocketing growth in the quantity of
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fertility
indicated in Qatar steep go up from 4 in 1990,
on the contrary
reach peaked a lower number in 3 by 2000. To
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explain
this, there was a
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drastically surge
by Oman and Saudi Arabia and underwent a marked fall to around 5 at the
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end
of the period.
Likewise
, In the UAE,
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it
dramatic rose to 4 in 1990 and
steadily
came down to 4 in 2000, providing the lowest
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amount
of birth indexing.
Moreover
, the number of birth indexing in Oman has a rocked
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improved
to 7 in 1990 and supplied with the highest
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amount
of
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fertility
among six
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different
countries.
Also
, the
next
second-largest
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amount
by Saudi Arabia which
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begins
with around 6, 5 in 1990 and finished with
merely
5, 5 in 2000.
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IELTS academic Write a report describing the information in the graph below fertility rate(births per woman)Gulf countries.

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