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2014 age distribution in Asia

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The pie chart above shows the age distribution of the population in Asian countries for 2014. The population is divided into five age groups: 0 to 14 years, 15 to 24 years, 25 to 54 years, 55 to 64 years, and 65 years and above. People in the 25 to 54 age group make up the largest group, at 35. 3 percent of the total population. The 15 to 24 group and 55 to 64 group make follow, with 19. 5 percent and 18. 4 percent of the population, respectively. 0 to 14 year olds make up 15. 6 percent of the population. Those aged 65 years and above hold the smallest share of the population, at 11. 2 percent. In summary, the pie chart shows that working-age adults (including teens 15 and older) made up the vast majority of the Asian population in 2014. Young children and seniors combined add up to just over a quarter of the total population.
The pie chart above
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the age distribution of the
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in Asian countries for 2014.

The
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is divided
into five age
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groups
: 0 to 14 years, 15 to 24 years, 25 to 54 years, 55 to 64 years, and 65 years and above.
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People
in the 25 to 54 age
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up the largest
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, at 35. 3
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of the total
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. The 15 to 24
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and 55 to 64
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follow, with 19. 5
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and 18. 4
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of the
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,
respectively
. 0 to 14
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olds
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up 15. 6
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of the
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. Those aged 65 years and above hold the smallest share of the
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, at 11. 2 percent.

In summary, the pie chart
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that working-age adults (including teens 15 and older) made up the vast majority of the Asian
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in 2014. Young children and seniors combined
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up to
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over a quarter of the total
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