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The bar chart illustrates changes in average GDP growth per decades since 1960 till 1990 for three types of countries.

The bar chart illustrates changes in average GDP growth per decades since 1960 till 1990 for three types of countries. G3gjB

The bar chart illustrates changes in average GDP growth per decades since 1960 till 1990 for three types of countries. Overall, the major changes belonged to W and G, however the growth trend in both countries is quite opposite. It means that W had a declining growth rate, while G had an increasing growth trend in forty years. NG is the only one that have experienced going up and plummeting between 1960s and 1990s. The figures for 1960s represents that the wealthy countries were by far the highest at close to 5% per annum, and also the first bar was double of the non- globalisers and three times bigger than globalisers during that decade. However, by the 1970s this trend had changed considerably; the globalisers doubled the annual GDP over this period and there was also a modest increase in the GDP of non- global countries, while the wealthy countries plummeted to 3% per year. In the 1980s, wealthy countries had kept declining steadily, and similarly non- global countries experienced a sharp decrease as well. It should be noted that global country GDP growth was still climbing. In the late decade, non- global countries had a tiny progress and rose to about 2%, and the opposite point is wealthy countries with a going down roughly 2% GDP rate. Although global countries could have a significant jump in 1990s.

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