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The pie chart shows the change in number of marriage in 2007

The pie chart shows the change in number of marriage in 2007 kb6DW
At a glance it can be seen that the number of marriage is been increasing ralidly we can also observe a upwards trend by 20 and a downwards trend by 60 we can observe that it always shows an upward trend glance it can be seen that the number of marriage is been increasing ralidly we can also observe a upwards trend by 20 and a downwards trend by 60 we can observe that it always shows an upward trend
At a glance it can be
seen
that the number of marriage
is been
increasing
ralidly
we can
also
observe
a
upwards
trend
by 20 and a downwards
trend
by 60 we can
observe
that it always
shows
an upward
trend
glance it can be
seen
that the number of marriage
is been
increasing
ralidly
we can
also
observe
a
upwards
trend
by 20 and a downwards
trend
by 60 we can
observe
that it always
shows
an upward
trend
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the change in number of marriage in 2007

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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