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The chart below gives information about the numbers of students who do different courses at an American university in 2017

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The bar chat illustrates data about the how many students studying 6 different subjects at an US university in 2017 Overal, more women studying in maketing and accounting with the comparison men, while opposite trend true for Economics and Maths. However, the numbers of student who studying engineeing and finance is almost equal. In 2010, the number of female student who studying Maketing was 2 times higher than men and the numbers were about 120 and 60 respectively. The same trend is also true for Accounting, however differences beetwen woman and man is not so high as in the maketing, it were approximately 30 students. Meantime, gender equality is shown in the number of students who studying finance and Engineering However, economics and mathematics were more prefeable field for male students and their numbers were sharply higher than women. In ecnomics, almost 60 females students studied but, males number was 150. Among these subjects, the highest difference was shown in matematics and male students was were 4 times higher than women
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