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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. yrbV
The chart provides data on how many people used social networking sites in Canada in the years 2014 and 2015. Overall, it seems that the majority of people commonly used only one site in 2014 and 2015, whereas the least of them preferred using 5 social networking sites. According to the statistics of the first three categories, the number of people that did not use any sites was at 22% in 2014 as opposed to 23% in 2015. Citizens in Canada who preferred using one site constituted one-third of the trend, whereas in 2015 that figure was less by 8%. There was a difference of only 1% between the users of the two sites in 2014 and 2015. Regarding users of three websites, it is seen that in 2014 people who benefited from these was not much, compared to ones that in 2015. When it comes to 4 websites, it is clear that in 2015, people used that amount of sites were more than in 2014 by 3%. As well with 5 social networks, in 2014 and year later the numbers of users were at 2% and 4% respectively.
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in Canada in the years 2014 and 2015.

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in 2014 and 2015, whereas the least of them preferred using 5 social networking sites.

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was at 22% in 2014 as opposed to 23% in 2015. Citizens in Canada who preferred using one
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constituted one-third of the trend, whereas in 2015 that figure was less by 8%. There was a difference of
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in 2014 and 2015.

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that in 2014
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who benefited from these was not much, compared to ones that in 2015. When it
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to 4 websites, it is
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that in 2015,
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were more than in 2014 by 3%.
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with 5 social networks, in 2014 and year later the numbers of users were at 2% and 4%
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