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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given information is in the form of a bar chart which presents the number of social networking websites used by people in Canada in 2014 and 2015. In 2014, more than one-fifth of the population, more accurately, 22% did not use any social networking site, this number saw a drop of 1% in 2015, which showed 21% of the population using none of the social networking sites. In 2014, 36% of the population used one social networking site, this number reduced to 28% in 2015. 23% of people used two social networking sites in 2014, in contrast to previous trends, this number was observed to increase, albeit a meager increase to 24%. Three social networking sites were used by 12% of the people and in just as with people using two social networking sites, this number also increased, in this case, sizably to 18%. Four social networking sites were only used by 5% of the people in 2014 and similarly to the previous couple of years, this number rose to 8% in 2015. Finally, five social networking sites were only used by 2% of the people and in accordance with the previous trend, this number was observed to double up to 4% in 2015. From the given graph it is evident that among the people using social networking websites, the majority of people used more websites in 2015 than they did in 2014. It can also be observed that from 2014 to 2015, more people have started using at least one social networking website. This is further cemented by the drop in percent of people using one site between 2014 and 2015 which points to the fact that more people are using more than one social networking website in 2015 than they did in 2014
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in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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, 22% did not
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any
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, this
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a drop of 1% in 2015, which
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21% of the population using none of the
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. In 2014, 36% of the population
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used
one
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reduced
to 28% in 2015. 23% of
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people
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used
two
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in 2014,
in contrast
to previous trends, this
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was observed
to increase, albeit a meager increase to 24%.

Three
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using two
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, this
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also
increased,
in this case
,
sizably
to 18%. Four
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by 5% of the
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in 2014 and
similarly
to the previous couple of years, this
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rose to 8% in 2015.
Finally
, five
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were
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used
by 2% of the
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and in accordance with the previous trend, this
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was observed
to double up to 4% in 2015.

From the
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graph it is evident that among the
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using
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networking websites, the majority of
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used
more websites in 2015 than they did in 2014. It can
also
be observed
that from 2014 to 2015, more
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have
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using at least one
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. This is
further
cemented by the drop in percent of
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using one
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between 2014 and 2015 which points to the fact that more
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are using more than one
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in 2015 than they did in 2014
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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