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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which can be unhealthy if consumed too much. The three types include sodium, saturated fats and added sugar. The data is taken from the United States of America. The first chart shows the average percentages of sodium. Dinner contains the most sodium (43%). breakfast and snacks include an equal proportion of sodium consumed, with each of them adding up 14% of sodium. Through eating lunch, 2-4% sodium is consumed. The second chart shows the percentages of saturated fat in meals, fty eating dinner, 7]% saturated fat is consumed. Lunch contributes to a consumption of 2-b% saturated fat, followed b'f snacks with 2-1% and breakfast with ib%. The last chart illustrates the proportions of added sugar. Snacks contain the highest amount of added sugar (4z%). Dinner includes 23% A typical dinner includes 2-? % added sugar, while lunch contains 14% and breakfast includes ib%. All in all, the diagrams show that evetty typical meal consumed in the USA contains a percentage of at least l4% of nutrients that can be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which

can be unhealthy if
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consumed
too much. The three types
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include
sodium,
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saturated
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fats
and
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added


sugar.
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The
data
is taken
from the United States of America.
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The
first
chart
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shows
the average percentages of sodium.
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Dinner
contains the most sodium (43%).

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breakfast
and snacks
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include
an equal proportion of sodium
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consumed
, with each of them adding

up 14% of sodium. Through eating lunch, 2-4% sodium is
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consumed
. The second chart
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shows
the

percentages of
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saturated
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fat
in meals,
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fty
eating
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dinner
, 7
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]
%
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saturated
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fat
is
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consumed
. Lunch

contributes to a consumption of 2-b%
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saturated
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fat
, followed b'f snacks with 2-1% and breakfast with

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ib%
. The last chart illustrates the proportions of
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added
sugar. Snacks contain the highest amount

of
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added
sugar (4z%).
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Dinner
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includes
23% A typical
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dinner
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includes
2-? %
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added
sugar, while lunch

contains 14% and breakfast
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includes
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ib%
.

All in all, the diagrams
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show
that
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evetty
typical meal
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consumed
in the USA contains a percentage of

at least l4% of nutrients that can be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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