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The chart below gives information about the number of pet owners from World Pet Organisation

The chart below gives information about the number of pet owners from World Pet Organisation OlDMj
The given chart presents the comparison of pet owners in six countries which include Wales, Canada, America, Ireland, Scotland, and England between the year 1990 and 1998. Overall, total number of individuals that had pets fluctuated over 9 years span. In 1994 showed the highest number, while after that one year, the smallest number occurred. In the fifth year, it showed the figure of more than 900, 000 which had the highest number of pet owners in that period of time. While America and Scotland contributed the most in that particular year with nearly a half of all number in 1994. In contrast, Ireland contributed the least. In 1995 however, saw the decrease to less than 800, 000. This year was the year that had the least amount of pet owners in 9 years period. Unlike last year America was one of the countries that distributed the least, the other country was Wales. Likewise, Ireland was still the least when it comes to the distribution.
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chart presents the comparison of pet owners in six countries which include Wales, Canada, America, Ireland, Scotland, and England between the
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1990 and 1998.

Overall
, total
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of individuals that had
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pets
fluctuated over 9 years span. In 1994
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the highest
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, while after that one
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, the smallest
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occurred.

In the fifth
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, it
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showed
the figure of more than 900, 000 which had the highest
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of pet owners in that period of time. While America and Scotland contributed the most in that particular
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with
nearly
a half of all
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in 1994.
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, Ireland contributed the least.

In 1995
however
,
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the decrease to less than 800, 000. This
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was the
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that had the least amount of pet owners in 9 years period. Unlike last
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America was one of the countries that distributed the least, the other country was Wales.
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, Ireland was
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the least when it
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to the distribution.
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